I will be adding examples of my work during the year. I hope that you enjoy looking at my work. Please help me to edit my work if there are mistakes and encourage me to be the best that I can possibly be.
THE LIGHTHOUSE KEEPERS CATASTROPHE Mr Grinling was a very good lighthouse keeper. He lived in a little white cottage with his wife Mrs Grinling. Every day Mrs Grinling sent food like bread rolls and muffins for him to eat and she sent it on a wire while Hamish the cat was watching her do it. The next day Mr and Mrs Grinling went fishing for fun and Hamish came along too. When Mrs and Mr Grinling were fishing Hamish snuck over to the yummy looking fish and started to gobble them down. After a minute Mr Grinling turned round and saw Hamish eating his fish and he said” HAMISH STOP EATING MY FISH L ”! And then told him “GO INTO THE LIGHT HOUSE”! So Hamish sadly L walked into the lighthouse and Mr Grinling angrily K walked away and went back to his fishingJ. While he was fishing he said” Lunch, lunch Oh yummy lunch. Can we go eat some please?” So he went to go and get Hamish from the lighthouse but he had left the keys in the lighthouse so that meant HAMISH WAS TRAPPED.L But Mr Grinling said "Do we have that spare key?" and at that very moment the key that was in the basket , rolled off the edge and into the water. So he said " Well I know we have a third." "Oh... but didn't you lose that the other week because it fell out of your pocket" said Mrs Grinling. "Oh right, so how are we going to save Hamish?" replied Mr Grinling .So they decided to go back to the house and think. When they got back to the house they started to think about how to save Hamish. After a while, Mrs Grinling said "You might be able to climb out the window and crawl across the wire and save Hamish." So Mr Grinling tried to climb out of the window but he was too FAT! so Mrs Grinling said "I will have to take your thick pants off so that you can squeeze out of the window." So Mr Grinling crawled out of the window and across the wire. When he got across the wire he hopped into the lighthouse and climbed down the stairs. When he reached the bottom he found Hamish the cat, got the keys and ran up the stairs and quickly turned on the light so all the ships were saved and so was Hamish. YAY!
Dissapointment
Disappointment is dark blue.
It tastes like bruised apples.
It smells like rotten fruit.
It looks like the sky is falling.
It sounds like someone one is dying.
It feels like defeat
KRUSTY THE CLOWN
This is Krusty the clown
he is so exciting and funny.
He dose a lot of things like get his
friend Rover the clown and they do
Funny things.
Krusty is very
Title: Cows In Action.
Author: Steve Cole.
I Like This Book Because:It has funny jokes and a story too.
My favianorite part is: When a mummy in 6000.bc drops a pot on his feet and yells really loud!
The main charcters are:
1: Professer Angus Mcmo
2:Little bo vine
3: Pat vine
4: Enemy Agent T808
My finished podium was a great podium please watch this =)
By Xander (A) and Tobi (B)
Call Of Duty Black Ops ( Zombies)
a Zombies lurking around in the darkness.
b breaking down baracades.
a saving up my points for an Olympia
b Next thing you know
ab Bang headshot he's down
a biulding up the baracades again
b Next wave incoming
a taking the revive drink
b we see the teleporter
ab
How To Do Procedural Writing
1. Write the goal or heading.
2. Write the word Materials
3. List all the Materials
4. Write the instructions using capital letters for the first word of a sentence or instruction.
5. Number the steps.
6.Write the steps in order.
7.Use Detailed Writing in your sentences so that the person reading the instructions knows exactly what to do.
8.You may use diagrams in your writing
9.Finally, make a comment and a conclusion
10. Now you have a piece of Procedural Writing of your own.
Pigz Gone WILD
Pig zilla is a giant pig with a sword across his backand he crushes every thing in his path. pig Zilla
I will be adding examples of my work during the year. I hope that you enjoy looking at my work. Please help me to edit my work if there are mistakes and encourage me to be the best that I can possibly be.
THE LIGHTHOUSE KEEPERS CATASTROPHE
Mr Grinling was a very good lighthouse keeper. He lived in a little white cottage with his wife Mrs Grinling. Every day Mrs Grinling sent food like bread rolls and muffins for him to eat and she sent it on a wire while Hamish the cat was watching her do it.
The next day Mr and Mrs Grinling went fishing for fun and Hamish came along too. When Mrs and Mr Grinling were fishing Hamish snuck over to the yummy looking fish and started to gobble them down. After a minute Mr Grinling turned round and saw Hamish eating his fish and he said” HAMISH STOP EATING MY FISH L ”! And then told him “GO INTO THE LIGHT HOUSE”! So Hamish sadly L walked into the lighthouse and Mr Grinling angrily K walked away and went back to his fishingJ.
While he was fishing he said” Lunch, lunch Oh yummy lunch. Can we go eat some please?” So he went to go and get Hamish from the lighthouse but he had left the keys in the lighthouse so that meant HAMISH WAS TRAPPED.L But Mr Grinling said "Do we have that spare key?" and at that very moment the key that was in the basket , rolled off the edge and into the water. So he said " Well I know we have a third." "Oh... but didn't you lose that the other week because it fell out of your pocket" said Mrs Grinling. "Oh right, so how are we going to save Hamish?" replied Mr Grinling .So they decided to go back to the house and think.
When they got back to the house they started to think about how to save Hamish. After a while, Mrs Grinling said "You might be able to climb out the window and crawl across the wire and save Hamish." So Mr Grinling tried to climb out of the window but he was too FAT! so Mrs Grinling said "I will have to take your thick pants off so that you can squeeze out of the window."
So Mr Grinling crawled out of the window and across the wire. When he got across the wire he hopped into the lighthouse and climbed down the stairs. When he reached the bottom he found Hamish the cat, got the keys and ran up the stairs and quickly turned on the light so all the ships were saved and so was Hamish. YAY!
Dissapointment
Disappointment is dark blue.
It tastes like bruised apples.
It smells like rotten fruit.
It looks like the sky is falling.
It sounds like someone one is dying.
It feels like defeat
KRUSTY THE CLOWN
This is Krusty the clown
he is so exciting and funny.
He dose a lot of things like get his
friend Rover the clown and they do
Funny things.
Krusty is very
Title: Cows In Action.
Author: Steve Cole.
I Like This Book Because:It has funny jokes and a story too.
My favianorite part is: When a mummy in 6000.bc drops a pot on his feet and yells really loud!
The main charcters are:
1: Professer Angus Mcmo
2:Little bo vine
3: Pat vine
4: Enemy Agent T808
My finished podium was a great podium please watch this =)
By Xander (A) and Tobi (B)Call Of Duty Black Ops ( Zombies)
a Zombies lurking around in the darkness.
b breaking down baracades.
a saving up my points for an Olympia
b Next thing you know
ab Bang headshot he's down
a biulding up the baracades again
b Next wave incoming
a taking the revive drink
b we see the teleporter
ab
How To Do Procedural Writing
1. Write the goal or heading.
2. Write the word Materials
3. List all the Materials
4. Write the instructions using capital letters for the first word of a sentence or instruction.
5. Number the steps.
6.Write the steps in order.
7.Use Detailed Writing in your sentences so that the person reading the instructions knows exactly what to do.
8.You may use diagrams in your writing
9.Finally, make a comment and a conclusion
10. Now you have a piece of Procedural Writing of your own.
Pigz Gone WILD
Pig zilla is a giant pig with a sword across his backand he crushes every thing in his path. pig Zilla